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He snarls at the multiplicity of the world
He dissembles
He wishes to drink up the sea
He has the combined wealth of
ten men, twenty men, a small island.

The devil is in him, il diabolo,
He is possessed, bewitched, zombified,
be careful,
He becomes quarrelsome on bad wine
and cheap mood-stabilizers,
is apt to harm anyone,
throws things around,
compasses, atlases,
refuses truth.

He has planted a dire crop in barren ground
He is a crippled helmsman.
©2006-2009 ~DeeplyDark
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For my lost friend *A-R-Glasgow

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:icondirtyteeth:
Fuckin' sexy. Yet I waited for a punchline that never came, I felt Il Diabolo had a sweeter side if you only gotten to know him better. A favorite no doubt if you'd just made me go what what what near the end.
The use of the word Atlas and Zombie as verbs is a nasty fuckin' gorgeosity (as in good), I love it when poets treat language like a weak wench, slapping her around and telling her what to do.
Point is, your language is leather and whip kinda one and it has this read on read on little reader kinda quality but it lacked a few slaps on our faces near the end. You have a mighty whip with nails and spikes that you never got to use on our demanding backs. Besides that, all lovely.
:iconyoursweetsix-six-six:
lost?! has he died?!

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your sweet six six six xxx
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thanks

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:iconthe-cry-of-mankind:
An agressive but saddening story... I fear the worst by the sounds of things...

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no, fortunatly he is ok, but not well! He had a major downer and when I saw him he looked like his mind was not on it at all, although he recognised me, he wasnt really wiv it. I didnt get much sense out of him, but its obvius he isnt happy , but the docs say he will be ok.

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see above

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well, letz hope not.

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:iconyoursweetsix-six-six:
the docs? he's been to hospital?

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your sweet six six six xxx

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