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The world, the flesh and the devil:
They are my constant companions.

I stare through an open window, and
Feel, in my heart, my creeping flesh,
As a bloated sun wallows in putrid clouds,
As the man next door slashes his wrists
And, somewhere, a dog throws a barking fit.

The world, the flesh and the devil
Are all there is...

I pass through an open door, and
Feel, in my mind, my creeping flesh,
As a withered moon sails a stormy sky,
As the women next door beats her kids,
And a starving cat claws at rubbish sacks.

This world (my world), this flesh (my flesh)
And the devil (is it me?), these
Are my place, my life – and my destiny.

II

Andromeda is blue and nearer now.

Spheres of light explode across the road.
We pass through every wavelength,
We endure every history
To reach the other side.
But what do we find?
Another world?
Same flesh?
Same devil?

Andromeda is blue and nearer now.
©2006-2009 ~DeeplyDark
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THE WORLD THE FLESH AND THE DEVIL

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:iconargosen:
Just..
I dont know, beutiful.
But it hit me like a punch in the face.
To straight for my taste.. I need to be touched carefully by poems

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Yimaman see noygel, see reffacul, see nod a bah, see naytoss, retee fo sellos

98% of teenagers do or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy
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Thankyou.

Misery is my friend, and he loves company.

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The cracked-open surface of Time
:icondyannag:
i found myself...beautiful piece...
by the way...like placebo?:)
:icondeeplydark:
I am a big fan of Brian yes :D

Thanks for the compliment.

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The cracked-open surface of Time
:iconyoursweetsix-six-six:
"As the man next door slashes his wrists"
harshhh..but works.

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your sweet six six six xxx
:icondeeplydark:
Ta Priya. ;)

Harsshh? In wot way? Life is hard darlin, it does work as well, i shud know.

Thanks for the comnt. :D

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The cracked-open surface of Time
:iconyoursweetsix-six-six:
i mean harsh as in..raw. most poetry i read is really metaphorical..this is just..yeah...raw.

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your sweet six six six xxx
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yup, i like raw. i like to ram the point home. :P

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The cracked-open surface of Time
:iconhairology:
Fabulous social commentry... I would fear you are being too harsh on yourself but no, I am not in your shoes so I will not patronize you. Excellent poem.

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